I don't remember what day it is, but lets still continue moving forward. We didn't do much today. All that was done was the script, which is very important especially for a dialog driven opening. It has to be intriguing to bring the audience in and keep them there. Here is a picture of the script:
Its a little hard to read.
This is the first part that starts the conversation. It is strong,but I wish it could be better. I think it's good enough though. It will show who and how the characters are. It goes hand in hand with the shots and angles. That's why on the storyboard under the pictures there is a word to show where in the script it is happening. So that we don't lose our place. The second page is underneath and is the non-ending of the conversation because it ends the scene, but not the conversation. They still continue talking while the camera zooms out to outside the diner. Even though you can't hear them. The conversation will continue later in the film.
You seem to know exactly what you are doing, but as a reader of the blog I feel a lot of confusion as to what exactly your vision is. You need to write a lot more and include more details in order to create the necessary emphasis that would allow someone like me to follow the process alongside with you. This is also just a personal preference but your blog isn't very appealing to the eyes. You are consistently posting which is good and you always say that your ideas are defined. I think you just have to pay more attention to your blog and how you write.
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